~The chosen one~
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~The chosen one~
~The chosen one~
~Chapter 1~
half serious/half hilarious rpg
Hello folks n.n
Story synopsis:
Screenshots:
Character bios:
~under construction~
Little mapping show demo:
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~Chapter 1~
half serious/half hilarious rpg
Hello folks n.n
Story synopsis:
- Spoiler:
- Filian [Name = wip] awakes higih in the sky, in front of an iron gate. an angel awaits him, and as soon as he talks to her God walks to him. he tells filian that he is 'The chosen one', the only person on earth who can defeat the Devil. [or evil God, whattevah u wish] Filian, confused as he is, follows God's instructions and joins the local army. after he finished his training [a training of a year] The troops from the dark lands attack his peaceful country. God tells the chosen one he has to find the armor of Marion [Name = wip]. as soon as he wears all the pieces of the armor, he transforms into a giant, and can defeat the evil army.
Screenshots:
- Spoiler:
Character bios:
~under construction~
Little mapping show demo:
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Last edited by Kane on 8th April 2011, 10:48 am; edited 3 times in total
Kane- Common Visitor
Re: ~The chosen one~
Don't you think that's abit much for the first chapter in your game? And it sounds abit like a used story, but nonetheless, it sounds like it will be really good (confused? I would be too)
I know this isnt the recruting page, but would you mind if I were a tile artist for it?
I know this isnt the recruting page, but would you mind if I were a tile artist for it?
NotteEterna- Dev Mod
Re: ~The chosen one~
It sounds good, altough i'm done with the tilesets *ashamed*
i did it myself already u.u
but i could use someone who gives constructive criticsm for now.
~thanks for feedback~
i did it myself already u.u
but i could use someone who gives constructive criticsm for now.
~thanks for feedback~
Kane- Common Visitor
Re: ~The chosen one~
Oh, don't worry about it then. I'm not too good yet anyway I dont think...
And I'd love to see them ...and Critisism should be my middle name so if you want, I can do that.
Anytime Kane
thats what just about everything I have made so far is missing. T-T
And I'd love to see them ...and Critisism should be my middle name so if you want, I can do that.
Anytime Kane
thats what just about everything I have made so far is missing. T-T
NotteEterna- Dev Mod
Re: ~The chosen one~
you shouldn't use tables for clouds...I think theres an mack to rtp of the heaven cloud tiles.
Strawberrycat- Moderator
Re: ~The chosen one~
Berry is right.
And if it's snowy things around it, why not use the snow tile?
And if it's snowy things around it, why not use the snow tile?
Arco- Epic Member
Re: ~The chosen one~
Your game looks good, but I have to agree with Strawberrycat24 and Arco. You shouldn't use tables as clouds it looks a little weird. Other than that everything else looks good.
Rose Guardian- Member
Re: ~The chosen one~
hmm i'll see what i will do. anyways, i only use rtp and a tile E of rtp stile u.u
i want to keep that.. i will look what i'll change
thanks for feedback<3
i want to keep that.. i will look what i'll change
thanks for feedback<3
Kane- Common Visitor
Re: ~The chosen one~
makes sense. I would just have used a pictured cloud over and the parallax for below in that case. but It is very creative so I give you credit for that ...plus finding the pic for that would be annoying...
NotteEterna- Dev Mod
Re: ~The chosen one~
hmmhm. and i can't find the cloud tileA2 >.<
searched bloody damn whole pages of rpgmakervx to find them. *im a failure n.n*
searched bloody damn whole pages of rpgmakervx to find them. *im a failure n.n*
Kane- Common Visitor
Re: ~The chosen one~
It's a mack conversion, did you search "Mack to RTP A2 Tilesets"?
Edit:
I made my own edit...I hope it works well.
Edit:
I made my own edit...I hope it works well.
Strawberrycat- Moderator
Re: ~The chosen one~
i have the non edited... lemme have a look n.n
Edit: Didn't work better then non-edited. yours haz lil error
Edit: Didn't work better then non-edited. yours haz lil error
Kane- Common Visitor
Re: ~The chosen one~
yeah it's a lil rough on the inner corners. I made a demo map and it looks a little sharp in places.
at least it's better than tables.
at least it's better than tables.
Strawberrycat- Moderator
Re: ~The chosen one~
yea but as i said i now haz original clouds n.n
uploading in three hours, when i get back from school
uploading in three hours, when i get back from school
Kane- Common Visitor
Re: ~The chosen one~
Kane, I just realized something with the ship...Its stairs dont line up the upper and lower floor proparly in the screenshot.
EDIT: The demo maps look nice, but due to some tiles (mushrooms, flowers, etc.) it is actually possible to walk on the mountain parts in some places.
EDIT: The demo maps look nice, but due to some tiles (mushrooms, flowers, etc.) it is actually possible to walk on the mountain parts in some places.
NotteEterna- Dev Mod
Re: ~The chosen one~
yup, mentioned that, already fixed n.n~
Man, do you guys sometimes feel like you're never going to finish your game because your story sucks? (like you make progress waaaay to fast T.T)
Man, do you guys sometimes feel like you're never going to finish your game because your story sucks? (like you make progress waaaay to fast T.T)
Kane- Common Visitor
Re: ~The chosen one~
XD Sometiomes I feel like I'm never going to finish because my writers aren't doing crap. And I'm almost at the end of what they've written so far.
Strawberrycat- Moderator
Re: ~The chosen one~
yeah...thats kind of why I have so many active stories...that and I am hyper-active on the inside.
NotteEterna- Dev Mod
Re: ~The chosen one~
man,, i like my projects for around two weeks... and then i get stuck >.<
Kane- Common Visitor
Re: ~The chosen one~
If you ever get stuck, maybe I can help? I am bound to be able to come up with something, even if it's just a side-quest or side-story of some kind.
NotteEterna- Dev Mod
Re: ~The chosen one~
I'm interested in where this will go as it seems quite interesting now that the flying tables are gone. Bumped
NotteEterna- Dev Mod
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