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Post by Kane 3rd April 2011, 8:43 am

~The chosen one~
~Chapter 1~

half serious/half hilarious rpg

Hello folks n.n

Story synopsis:
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Screenshots:
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Character bios:

~under construction~

Little mapping show demo:
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Post by NotteEterna 3rd April 2011, 9:06 am

Don't you think that's abit much for the first chapter in your game? And it sounds abit like a used story, but nonetheless, it sounds like it will be really good Very Happy (confused? I would be too)

I know this isnt the recruting page, but would you mind if I were a tile artist for it?
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Post by Kane 3rd April 2011, 9:36 am

It sounds good, altough i'm done with the tilesets *ashamed*
i did it myself already u.u
but i could use someone who gives constructive criticsm for now.

~thanks for feedback~
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Post by NotteEterna 3rd April 2011, 9:42 am

Oh, don't worry about it then. I'm not too good yet anyway I dont think...

And I'd love to see them Smile ...and Critisism should be my middle name so if you want, I can do that.

Anytime Kane
thats what just about everything I have made so far is missing. T-T
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Post by Strawberrycat 3rd April 2011, 4:03 pm

you shouldn't use tables for clouds...I think theres an mack to rtp of the heaven cloud tiles.
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Post by Arco 3rd April 2011, 4:07 pm

Berry is right.

And if it's snowy things around it, why not use the snow tile?
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Post by Rose Guardian 3rd April 2011, 8:08 pm

Your game looks good, but I have to agree with Strawberrycat24 and Arco. You shouldn't use tables as clouds it looks a little weird. Other than that everything else looks good.
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Post by NotteEterna 3rd April 2011, 8:53 pm

floating tables~ ....but really...theyre right...
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Post by Kane 4th April 2011, 2:52 am

hmm i'll see what i will do. anyways, i only use rtp and a tile E of rtp stile u.u
i want to keep that.. i will look what i'll change

thanks for feedback<3
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Post by NotteEterna 4th April 2011, 11:24 pm

makes sense. I would just have used a pictured cloud over and the parallax for below in that case. but It is very creative so I give you credit for that Very Happy ...plus finding the pic for that would be annoying...
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Post by Kane 5th April 2011, 1:16 am

hmmhm. and i can't find the cloud tileA2 >.<
searched bloody damn whole pages of rpgmakervx to find them. *im a failure n.n*
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Post by Strawberrycat 5th April 2011, 11:58 am

It's a mack conversion, did you search "Mack to RTP A2 Tilesets"?

Edit:
I made my own edit...I hope it works well.
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Post by Kane 6th April 2011, 1:16 am

i have the non edited... lemme have a look n.n

Edit: Didn't work better then non-edited. yours haz lil error Sad
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Post by Strawberrycat 6th April 2011, 12:09 pm

yeah it's a lil rough on the inner corners. I made a demo map and it looks a little sharp in places.

at least it's better than tables.
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Post by Kane 7th April 2011, 1:18 am

yea but as i said i now haz original clouds n.n
uploading in three hours, when i get back from school
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Post by Kane 8th April 2011, 10:49 am

Added Mapping-show demo.
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Post by NotteEterna 10th April 2011, 9:27 am

Kane, I just realized something with the ship...Its stairs dont line up the upper and lower floor proparly in the screenshot.

EDIT: The demo maps look nice, but due to some tiles (mushrooms, flowers, etc.) it is actually possible to walk on the mountain parts in some places.
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Post by Kane 11th April 2011, 1:57 pm

yup, mentioned that, already fixed n.n~
Man, do you guys sometimes feel like you're never going to finish your game because your story sucks? (like you make progress waaaay to fast T.T)
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Post by Strawberrycat 11th April 2011, 2:13 pm

XD Sometiomes I feel like I'm never going to finish because my writers aren't doing crap. And I'm almost at the end of what they've written so far.
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Post by NotteEterna 11th April 2011, 4:26 pm

yeah...thats kind of why I have so many active stories...that and I am hyper-active on the inside.
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Post by Kane 12th April 2011, 1:05 am

man,, i like my projects for around two weeks... and then i get stuck >.<
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Post by NotteEterna 12th April 2011, 4:08 pm

If you ever get stuck, maybe I can help? I am bound to be able to come up with something, even if it's just a side-quest or side-story of some kind.
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Post by NotteEterna 1st May 2011, 2:30 pm

I'm interested in where this will go as it seems quite interesting now that the flying tables are gone. Bumped Smile
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