Star Kingdoms

First of all I originally made this game for my friend’s seven year old nephew. He is actually very good at video games. Since this was made for originally made for a kid I apologize if it is a little childish. I just decided to share it.



-Story-
Rob was just a normal kid until one day his friends Lisa and Alan helped him clean the basement where his room is. Alan found a mysterious door with chains on it. They then took the change off of the door. After that Alan got curious and went through the door. Lisa got worried and went in after him. Next Rob finally went through the door.
Rob strangly woke up in a strange world and didn’t know where he was at. Until someone opened the door off the house he was in front off. It was Mario and Luigi and Rob was freaked out wondering;”How in the world did I get in the Nintendo Universe!”



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Rob:
Age: 14
Height: 5’8
Weight: 140lbs
Profile: Rob is the main character of the story. It is his job to help Mario and Luigi restore all of the stars to the Nintendo worlds.

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Lisa:
Age: 14
Height: 5’
Weight: 110lbs
Profile: Lisa is one of Rob’s best friends. However he cannot seem to find out which world she is in after being pulled into the Nintendo Universe.

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Alan:
Age: 14
Height: 5’8
Weight: 130lbs
Profile: Alan is another best friend of Rob. He was the one who found the door leading to the Nintendo Universe and the first to enter. Rob cannot find which world he is in either.

There are more characters but since they belong to Nintendo I cannot really describe them.

Screen Shots

Spoiler:

These are the Nintendo worlds you will visit in the game. Right now only the Mario World is playable in the demo.
The Mario World
The Zelda World
The Kirby World
The Metoroid World
The Star Fox World
The Fire Emblem World(Hopefully this won’t keep those who dislike Fire Emblem from playing it.)
Final World(Name TBA but will be something I made up)

Demo(Non-encrypted but doesn’t contain the RTP)

Code:

http://www.4shared.com/file/hE7qfBKN/Star_Kingdoms.html

Instructions on how to fight are included in a text file with the demo.

Credits:
Graphics
Nintendo
A faceset Generator cannot remember who made it but if anyone knows let me know so that I can credit them.
Damain666's Character Generator
Enterbrain
celiana's faceset generator
Music:
Nintendo
Enterbrain
Scripts:
Vlad's ABS
Mog's Animated Title Miria

Then Then Then Then Then...
Your vocabulary is really limited in your writing.
I would take a writing class if I were you.

Even I know that repeating "then" sentence after sentence makes something too repetitive (It's basic Middle school english).

My grammer is bad I don't know how else to describe the story. I took an English class at my college and passed it with a C. However I am going to college for animation.

you can try varying your transitions
Then, Next, Later, After that, they are all very good transitions to use.
you can also start a new paragraph without using a transition.
Just use a scene change (describe a new place).

I'm a pretty good writer myself.
and these are all things I use when writing for my games.

Thank you I changed the wording a little.

Are those celianas faces?
I hate her faces....=.=

Btw

I have the official guide for smash bros brawl, and it has descriptions for each character in it.
I could type them for you if you like just let know of who?

Light wrote:Are those celianas faces?
I hate her faces....=.=

Btw

I have the official guide for smash bros brawl, and it has descriptions for each character in it.
I could type them for you if you like just let know of who?

n_n I feel the same however the parts she came up with are pretty fun to use when frankening.

So this time, they know they are in a video game world? Interesting...

BTW, like Light, I also have the guide, but I would think you know enough about them if you are making the game, plus there is bound to be a Nintendo Wiki. and if not, each series has one, or at least Mario, Zelda, and Kirby do.

And I also hate here portraits...but yours look pretty good. (though the one does look alot like Kiri from KH...

@Light
Thank you for telling me who's faces they were. I guess it was her face generator I used. Also yes please type out the character descriptions of Mario, Luigi, Link, Kirby, Fox Mcloud, Samus and Marth. Also could anyone make me DK's sprite from Donkey Kong?

@NotreEterna
I did not intentionally make the girl look like Kairi.

I figured you didn' and it is probably just me that thinks that. specifically Kairi in KH2.

And I want to sooo make a Nintendo spoof game XD Kirby could be used for sooo many jokes though Kirby is my fav character...

I can make an RTP version of this game if you want to play it but the RTP version will have to be encrpyted to work without VX.

That was random O.o but i dont think that would help any...ill just wait for a better laptop

Okay.