Black Bounty - Dragon's Eye

Hey, guys.
If you remember my early days of OmegaDev, I made a thread called Black Bounty Dragon's Eye.
And I never finished the game.
So, I'm starting it again. As a community project.
I would apreciate help.

OLD plot:

In the kingdom of Naioru (I couldn't think of a better name...) thievery has become very high.
One know criminal is called Narcisius. So called for stealing a necklace.
But is this thievery part of a bigger plot? Only time will tell.

New plot -
Arco, a young boy, is the herald to the Naioric throne, is finally born, after much suspense. But when a war is started between the Naiorics and the Farastani, Arco has to be sent away.
16 years later, Arco is working in a farm town, Turrel Village. He is sent into Greffit Forest to retrieve a Stolen Necklace, and is then plunged into the deep world of Black Bounty - Dragon's Eye.


CHARACTERS -
Necrofernas:
Razdan - King of the Underworld.
Kaor - An Ifrit Marasti, Razdan's servant.
Fuchii - A beautiful girl from the Underworld. She dreams of seeing the outside world.
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Naiorics:
Arco - The main protagonist, leader of the Order of Marani Skyea.
Marani Skyea (Deceased) - King of Nairou.
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Farastanis:
Narcissius - A theif, full of speed.
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Order of Marani Skyea:
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Other:
Duke Ferrel Warus - Duke and leader of the Naioric Resistance.



More coming soon

The yellow font hurts my eyes... *bleeding corneas*

Yeah...I had to stare at it for 3 minutes before I just highlighted it and made it black so I could see it...

For one thing though...There isn't much of a plot here...but anyway, uhh..."underworld-ians"? Hope...why?

I couldn't think of a better way to put it?

why not Necrophians? (not shure wher i got the "phi" part, but necro means dead which may still work...)

I guess. But they are not really "Dead". (They were born in the underworld. Fuchii has never seen the outside world.)

Just a quick suggestion...but still, maybe try to find a creative name? its just...I dont know...awkward compared to the other names?

I will change it soon.

I'm thinking Reaparcs?

try an "i" between the "r" and "c". other than that, it sounds good to me. (I am saying that because otherwise the pronunciation sounds like crap from how I am guessing it is pronounced...)

Reaparics.
Uhh...I dunno. It was supposed to be pronounced Reap-Arcs, but I guess we can get a new name.

Necronics?

I thought it was reap-er-cs....so yeah, that works then. "Reaparcs" it is?

Hmm...Let's just use Nercoferna.

(Inferna is latin for lower regions)

So "lower-death"? well the name itself sounds cool.

Yeah.